1. I am Alex Clouser, a second-year Business Administration major. Some skills that I have are my communication skills, my work ethic, and my ability to pick things up quickly. If I were to start it, I see this business becoming a huge part of my life as I always give my all in my endeavors and try my hardest in anything I do.
2. I am offering an alternative and more interactive approach to data collection for companies that want to collect data from consumers but are stifled because of the public stigma surrounding data collection.
3. I am offering it to companies that use data collection methods that regular consumers are wary of. My customers all have the shared desire to collect data from their consumers so as to further their products and tailor them more to consumer demands in future endeavors.
4. It is valuable to my customers because they need consumer data in order to successfully further their business ventures and create effective modifications to existing products or to create effective entirely new products that consumers will want to buy.
5. What sets me apart from everyone else is my goal to help small businesses and corporations alike because I see businesses and corporations as the backbone of our economy and believe that without them we would fail as an economy because of the revenue and jobs that they create for our nation. Many people think of corporations, especially, as being money hungry and greedy and do not see the importance of them to our way of life and their impact on our quality of life in our country.
I believe that these aspects fit together because they show that my head and effort are in the right place with regards to this business. It shows that I believe in my product and the success it can bring, with the right resources. It also shows my willingness to make things happen and to not give up easily at the first sign of hardship. It also shows my desire to create a product that can benefit many people and improve upon our society for the greater good.
I did not make any significant changes to my idea napkin based on my feedback to the last idea napkin because my feedback was so overwhelmingly positive and everyone seemed to like my idea and supported what I was saying in my post.
Great job of taking your positive feedback from your previous idea napkin, and making sure that they were incorporated into this one to ensure a high quality idea napkin. With these aspects in mind, well done of elaborately breaking down each factor of your business.
ReplyDeleteIt seems that you have a clear idea to write on a napkin, but in all seriousness this proves that you are advancing your idea based on the feedback you received from the previous time. I hope that your idea becomes reality because you clearly show that you are ready for it.
ReplyDeleteI like how clear and concise this read felt. There was no confusion in the mission of your company and it's need in the market. I feel like you could better express how any qualities or experienceyou have can relate to the field of data collection.
ReplyDeleteHi Alex,
ReplyDeleteI'm glad that you got positive feedback from your first entry. I think you have a good understanding of your business idea and what you can bring to the table. Good job!