Great job of going back to your feedback, and applying the comments into your second pitch. With these adjustments, the improvements in this pitch were evident. I think that starting off with a hook allowed the audience to be more engaged right away with your pitch. It is clear that you know what you are talking about, and your pitch flowed really well. Well done!
I think the addition of the hook was good! I received a comment to add a hook too, and I think it helps with the flow of the pitch. I recommend using nonverbal communication. So you should use some hand gestures or move around a little. Overall, your pitch flowed really well.
Great job of going back to your feedback, and applying the comments into your second pitch. With these adjustments, the improvements in this pitch were evident. I think that starting off with a hook allowed the audience to be more engaged right away with your pitch. It is clear that you know what you are talking about, and your pitch flowed really well. Well done!
ReplyDeleteHi Alex,
ReplyDeleteI think the addition of the hook was good! I received a comment to add a hook too, and I think it helps with the flow of the pitch. I recommend using nonverbal communication. So you should use some hand gestures or move around a little. Overall, your pitch flowed really well.