All of my feedback on my last elevator pitch was very positive, with a few suggestions which I incorporated into this elevator pitch. I started with a hook again, and this time I used hand gestures and was not just standing still like I was in my last one.
Friday, November 8, 2019
Alex Clouser- Elevator Pitch No. 3 Assignment 22
All of my feedback on my last elevator pitch was very positive, with a few suggestions which I incorporated into this elevator pitch. I started with a hook again, and this time I used hand gestures and was not just standing still like I was in my last one.
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I can definitely see the improvements in your pitch. It has really become refined, and your comfort in front of the camera shows. I can see a real salesmanship in you, and I encourage you to keep you that attitude in life. Salesmanship is an extremely useful trait and I hope you nurture that talent for your future career and business.
ReplyDeleteThe improvement in your pitch is evident, as you presented your pitch with confidence and the overall flow of the pitch was fluent. I liked the addition of the hand gestures, which allowed your pitch to be more engaging and not so still. Overall, I found that you did a great job of presenting your business idea in your pitch.
ReplyDeleteHi Alex,
ReplyDeleteI definitely enjoyed watching your elevator pitch because the improvement was there. I think you displayed more confidence by being open with your hand gestures. Also, I like how you recorded outside. It's just something different. Also, you sounded confidence as well. Great job!