I don't think you need the part where you introduce yourself as a business major becuase it is a very relevant to your idea. Also think it would be beneficial if you maybe started off with a hook instead of your name.
I don't think you need the part where you introduce yourself as a business major becuase it is a very relevant to your idea. Also think it would be beneficial if you maybe started off with a hook instead of your name.
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